Story idea when you try to actually write it:

Story idea when you first rewrite it:

Getting closer to what you saw in your head, eh? Keep at it!

Your story when somebody else sees it:

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This is a lovely post. It goes to show that when we percieve our own work, most of us have some type of insecurities about our own talents. 

This.